Here’s My story foor the Book room writing Contest 08. Check it out!
The Surf Competition
By Yoshiru
It was a sunny day in Clubpenguin. The Big surfing competition at the Cove
will begin tommorow. A dark blue penguin named Yoshiru, and his Red puffle named Bacon, are practicing for the Clubpenguin surfing competition. Yet, Bacon is still struggling doing his ULTAMITE trick, The cannon flip. Yoshiru has only seen Bacon do it once. But still, Bacon has never did it again! Because it’s a Dangerous trick. ”C’mon Bacon! I know it’s a Dangerous trick, but it’s the only way we can win that Competition!” said Yoshiru. ”SQUEAK!” Bacon replied with a frownie face. ”Ok, how about this. You tell me how I did in Surfing, you can say Cool, okay, crazy, bad or any other thing you thought about me, so you understand?…good! Now start paying attention.” said Yoshiru. Then Bacon just sat there, watching Yoshiru walking up to the penguin with the jetpack, who also drops the surfers on top of the waves.”Excuse me, could you take me to that wave over there?” said Yoshiru as he pointed to the wave.”Sure.” said the Jetpack penguin. Then he carried Yoshiru all the way to the wave. Bacon was worried, something bad might happen to him at the Competition. Like falling off his surfboard and Drowning! Bacon was so worried, he had to tell Yoshiru. But couldn’t. Yoshiru didn’t understand anything about what Bacon said, Because puffles don’t talk! Yoshiru went back home with Bacon. The next day, another day with sunshine. The competition started at the cove. 15 penguins participated.
Yoshiru was one of them, and some other penguins brought their Red puffles too. ”Alright surfers! are you ready to start surfing?!?…ok! here are th rules of this Competition, 1, No Cheating!! 2, Judges will vote how well you did! okay, let’s
Begin the competition!!” said the announcer. After all of the penguins finished, it was Yoshiru’s turn, Yoshiru was the last penguin to surf, most of the other penguins scored average, like 7,6,6 from the judges. But there was a penguin who scored 9,10,9! The highest score so far! ” Okay, Bacon… This is it!” said Yoshiru. Bacon quietly grabbed his surfboard and went to the water with Yoshiru. It’s been minutes when Yoshiru was at the wave, he was doing okay, but not Bacon.”Go, Bacon, Go Boy!!!! You can do it!” said Yoshiru. ”C’mon Bacon, look at all of these people watching us!”. Then all of a sudden, Bacon Quickly thought how upset Yoshiru would be if they lost. Bacon knew what he had to do to make his owner Happy. The Cannon flip! Bacon finally did it again! Everybody at the cove was surprised! ”OH MY GOSH! That is one of the most Greatest tricks i’ve ever seen!!” Said one of the judges. All of the judges quickly raised up Yoshiru’s score, 10,10,9!!! Yoshiru has won the Clubpenguin Surf competition!
Yoshiru was proud about what Bacon finally did! The wave stopped, Yoshiru and Bacon floated back to shore on their Surfboards.”Congratulations Yoshiru! You win this year’s Clubpenguin surf competition!!” said the announcer while giving Yoshiru the trophy. ”Actually I will like to dedicate this Award to my Red Puffle, Bacon.” said Yoshiru. Bacon smiled and Squeaked.


Kool story i liked it.
Comment by cpmoneymaka — Thursday, May 29, 2008 @ 12:24 am
yea thanks, i think i know why i didn’t win, because it was probably too short.
Comment by yoshiru — Saturday, May 31, 2008 @ 11:50 pm
cool story but i think you didnt win because you might have made a FEW couple mistakes.;)Anyway that story was awesome!!!
Comment by Piplup U — Saturday, June 28, 2008 @ 7:43 pm